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Now, where were we?

20 Mar

 Sooo, it’s been a while….   How about we pour a cup of coffee and have a chat.  

How are you?  Things going well?  

(Polite girls ask about their guests before launching into their stories…  Wouldn’t Emily Post be proud?)

Since we last talked, a few things have happened and not happened.  I’m still working the day job and, if anything, it’s picked up.  But… BUT I haven’t given up.  The writing happens in snatches and bits, but I have one new analogy and an important plot line all worked out.  

Also, I treated myself to two new writing books to study.  I devoured books like these during my early 20s, but it’s been… cough… a while.  If you don’t study your craft, are you sure you’re a craftsman?  So, I’m currently studying “Hooked” by Les Edgerton and “The Fire in Fiction” By Donald Maass.

 

Also, my hubs and I traveled to Roatan, Honduras, for two weeks.  The trip was part volunteer work/part vacation.  We helped build a new Kingdom Hall with the locals and other volunteers from all over the world.  Yes, friends, I learned how to lay block walls and mix cement!  And yes, I got a lovely sunburn on the beach.  

What a wonderful time!  And very eye-opening.  It’s one thing to see poverty on television, it’s another to walk down its streets.  I hope I never take an average subdivision street lined with “normal” houses for granted again.  I loved the people and I loved the area.  The bugs do not have my adoration, but REI’s Jungle Juice does.  Worked fabulously.  I’ll be sharing a few pictures from that trip now and again, but here a few.  

I’ve missed you all.  We really must do coffee again soon!

– Girl Parker

Rear Window… Alas, no Jimmy Stewart here

18 Jan

This window is my favorite.  

This is why.

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Linking up to Heidi at www.measamother.com today.  Thanks, Heidi!

“Kindly restrict your comments to the weather…”

21 Dec

In Sense & Sensibility, Mrs. Dashwood chastises her youngest daughter for speaking improperly about her older sister’s feelings for Mr. Ferrars, stating the above if she has nothing proper to say.

In writing, beginning with a mention of the weather will kill your chances with an agent.  ”It was a dark and stormy night” = trash can (or the delete button). I repeat, unless you enjoy rejection, Never Ever begin with the weather.  Or a dream sequence.  Ann Collette, a literary agent with The Rees Agency, has begun posting on Twitter her reactions to the first 12 submissions of the day.  Two or three PER DAY are rejected because of weather or dreaming on the first page.

Get past the first several pages or chapters, however, and it’s a whole other ball game.  Weather can add drama, frustration, separation.  Imagine a parent trapped in a plane on the runway as the snow piles up, the claustrophobia building, the crazy loon in the next seat beginning to fish around in his soiled backpack.

What if it’s a person’s first experience with snow?

My desert-born boy, working that shovel last year.

Confused desert kitty. "Mommy, where's my scorpion friend?"

What if the temperature soars into the 100s and the light-headed feeling he/she has builds into heat stroke, causing them to pass out just inside the door at the grocery store?

Saguaro shade can be tricky.

Use weather wisely and it will texture the story with added drama.  It will also keep you out of hot water with your mother, and hopefully with your agent.

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Linking up with Heidi at “Me as a Mom” for Black & White Wednesday.

 Black and White Wednesday

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